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HITMAN REBORN (FAN FIC) The Undecimo Wed Dec 21, 2011 2:44:29 PM#227971Perm Link
The Undecimo is the future 11th head of the vongola family Rui Tsunayoshi did not know that her father is the 10th although he is a young boss still Tsuna feels that it is time to train his daughter to become the Undecimo (Eleventh) because she is at the age that he first met reborn. He raised her as he was raised but acts as if he is a regular business man who is always on the go so she lives in namimori with her grandmother, and her mother kyoko. She thinks her dad is a boring corporate worker, unlike tsuna she is pretty intelligent but also shy and clumsy. She fears confrontation and lets people walk all over her and keeps her thoughts to herself. She has zero talent and is a kind hearted girl who likes to skate by doing the bare minimum and loves anime and manga. She has just met a child who is her tutor, now let the adventure begin
I AM MAKING SLIGHT CHANGES TO THE ELEMENT SHE HAS AND HER GUARDIANS SHE WILL HAVE THE SKY ELEMENT BUT NOT THE SKY LIKE TSUNA I HOPE WHOEVER READS THIS LIKES MY TAKE ON IT AND IT WILL HAVE LOTS OF CLIMACTIC AND SURPRISING MOMENTS AND COMEDY
name: Rui Tsunayoshi
age: 17
appearance:
element: SKY
guardian element
weapon: None yet
likes: Sleep, Manga and Anime
dislikes: Being too active, hard work, physical work
strengths: She is intelligent
weakness: Shyness, Boys
personality: Shy, Lazy, Bright but doesn't like to show it
history: The daughter of Tsuna and Kyoko she lives with her mom and grandma, Tsuna is rarely home because he is a boring businessman always on the run. She has no respect for her dad and likes to sleep, she recently turned 16 and has just met a baby who is suppose to be her tutor
Name: Forte (Italian for “mighty one”)
Age: 14
Appearance: Wild, deep red hair pulled downwards into a medium length ponytail, the bangs are longer on the sides of his face (Sasuke-style); striking yellow eyes; peach skin with a light red tattoo near left eye-it has a point that’s aimed towards the eye and then a section on the outside of the point goes down to half of his cheek; canines are notably longer and sharper than most others; He wears a black athletic jacket (Collar popped up)-each sleeve has a white stripe going from the elbow down to end of sleeve, there’s a large white section on chest and two more stripes in the middle of the back; The jacket is zipped down a little over half way to reveal no shirt but bandages covering most of torso; black athletic style pants that cinch bellow his knees and are a little baggy; bandages are wrapped around the middle portion of his left calf and around both feet-acting as footwear-and on his hands(mostly palms)-acting as slightly padded gloves; built lean and muscular, he is also very handsome; tends to roll sleeves up (showing more bandages on arms); His expression is usually boredom, even while fighting
-5’07” , 125 Lbs.
Guardian Element: Wrath/Possibly contain Sky– he is the only one who can use the Flame of Wrath. It was said to be the most destructive Flame among all of the Vongola Bosses.
-Unlike Vongola Second, he does not need to be enraged to use these flames; but like Vongola Second he does not need a ring to light the flames
Weapon: He is the only one who doesn’t need one, and instead shoots the flames out of his hands – like the Second (Ricardo); just like the Second, he has unrivaled combat abilities and the intensity to match
-The special characteristic of this Flame is its extreme destructive power which can reduce anything to ashes.
-The flames’ strength increases when he becomes angry.
-He is capable of forming his flames into various forms, from swords to spears and shields to barriers (but he would rather fight hand-to-hand since it means getting up close and personal – and he likes to be in someone’s face and hear them scream or beg for mercy); so he usually has his flames encasing his fists or feet (or whatever he fights with)…he also likes to challenge himself by fighting with hands only or sometimes feet only – this annoys a lot of people, as it seems like Forte takes fighting as more of a joke than anything
Likes: Sitting in a tree and reading, Having some type of snack on hand (ranging from an entire loaf of bread hidden in his shirt to a grilled fish in his shoe…ask him for something and he most likely has it hidden somewhere), Really noisy and annoying people tick him off, Idiots who underestimate him, Staring up at stars
Dislikes: Weaklings who try to fight him (he won’t fight someone that he knows will be easily defeated, but if they put up a fight then he will show respect), When girls ask him out (he looks like a model…pretty much a sexy beast xD), Wearing real clothing (he likes his bandages, especially since they are specially made to withstand his overwhelming flames)
Strengths: Forte has unrivaled combat abilities and amazing strength and speed (he trained himself to be able to outfight anyone and everyone, even though he still loses once in a while – but this usually happens when Forte’s short attention span kicks in). He can disarm anyone’s weapon with ease. His agility is of the extreme level, and he has earned the nickname “Feather Feet”.
Weakness: He has a short attention span…
Personality: Forte is a bored character who has the expression to show it. Forte does enjoy pointing out people’s mistakes though, and it has been stated that Forte can either be “the greatest friend a person could have” or “the world’s most infuriating person who can’t pay attention for more than a second”. But once Forte does become focused, it would be best to stay away, as his intentions are rarely revealed – and if those intentions are on killing someone, he will definitely obliterate them. He is rarely amused, and can be seen looking into space and zoning out instead of paying attention to the task at hand. But if Forte does become ticked, he isn’t ticked but PISSED. Forte being angry is bad in itself, as his flames are powerful as it is…
History: Forte is one of those “mystery” characters. Whenever someone asks about his past, he answers with something different every time. He is incredibly powerful like his father Guess Who That IS
name: Liliane Cyrille Deveaux
age: 17
appearance: http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7160/6473959627_988cd790d1_z.jpg
guardian element: Storm
weapon: http://konachan.com/sample/e81ac5c50d02289c782d619f8156c551/Konachan.com%20%20121478%20sample.jpghttp://konachan.com/sample/08285e3c7b90fe0636d95783eed3b763/Konachan.com%20-%20121477%20sample.jpg the gloves they reach up to her elbow and has a crescent shaped blade on it
likes: her brother, sour candies, playing the flute, fighting, wining, and her aunt.
dislikes: her parents, flowers (she has allergies), sweet things, losing, people that bully her brother and farm animals. (they hate her for some reason)
strengths: she is very good in hand to hand combat and close range attacks.
weakness: her inability to keep calm in dire situation which mostly turns out in anger. as well as how she expresses herself in anger toward most other people.
personality: she is very short tempered and tends to blow up at just about everyone. she is not tolerable to any one her trys to mess with the people she likes/finds close enough towards her. she is also a sore loser.
history: as a child she was almost all ways the best in what she did: sports, school, and even music. ether parents praised her and showered her with gifts and anything she would want for this, but when she got older she saw that her parents were ignoring her brother. so in there stead she took care of praised and even practicably raised her brother. years after her parents saw her do this and told her to just leave him alone for because they were going to send him away, but before that could happens she called the only person knew would take the both of them in without telling there parents, there aunt. there aunt from there mothers side had a long sibling rivalry but, still allays sent chirstmas and birthday presents to the both of them so liliane knew that she cared for them. after they called there aunt, she said she would order plane tickets for them so they could move from france to japan so they would be safe with her. now she lives a life in namimori with her aunt and brother.
name: Nathan Aurèle Deveaux
age: 15
apperance: http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7164/6473959261_fe3833dd0d_b.jpg
guardian element: Moon
weapon: http://konachan.com/sample/fa09b51b612c40abbd2024e1075c14ff/Konachan.com%20%20111976%20sample.jpg
likes: sweets, cool weather, swimming, drawing, his older sister, the dark, fresh air, and relaxing
dislikes: huge crowds, violence, surprises, his parents, and
strengths: he is very calm and can think on his toes, he is fairly good at dodging and defending himself.
weakness: he hates to hurt people and seeing them hurt.
personality: kind, caring, calm, can't stay angry at most people for too long, and is just about the only person that can stop his sister when she is in raged.
history: he was ignored by his parents as a child for being good enough or that is what he was told by kids at school the reason was. the things he loved to do most were drawing and spending time with his sister who always complemented his art, so he drew lots of pictures for her. as he got older he realized what his parents were doing was wrong, but he never resented his sister for it. as he was drawing one day he over herd his parents talking about sending him away. when there parents told his sister she yelled at them telling them that they were horrible parents and yelled at them at the top of her lungs, after she called there aunt who always remembered him, and got him things for his birthday and christmas two and not just his sister like most of there relatives. so after they got on a plane to namimore to live with there kind aunt.
Name: Pete Ankenti
age: 17
appearance: http://www.renderat.com/minato-namikaze-render/
guardian element: Breeze
weapon: Long Katana, in picture.
likes: Quiet, Meditating, Reading, fighting.
dislikes: Loud stuff, Interupters.
strengths: Sword Fighting, Protectiveness, Intelligence"
weakness: Bubble Gum, Over protectiveness, Easily angered.
personality: Really jumpy, one day could be all hyper and stuff the next glum and angered.
history: A sophmore at namimori middle and is a member of the kendo club, a nice easy going kind of guy
(omg! yay what is moon and breeze? =D they sound cool!!)
Edited at Wed Dec 21, 2011 4:00:34 PM
in this book i have the recipe for disaster. if you want to know what it is. ask, and i shall tell you, "what is written here is the greatest threat to all man kind, the names of my friends."
Like lightning i made it up the person can solidify moonlight busy like lamb can make lightning solid and breeze works like the rain element can slow people and things down without them knowing i changed it because rui has the sky element but its the night sky element
in this book i have the recipe for disaster. if you want to know what it is. ask, and i shall tell you, "what is written here is the greatest threat to all man kind, the names of my friends."
name:esperimento (Esper for short)
age: he is 21 but he looks like a baby)
appearance: http://mob276.photobucket.com/albums/kk5/babyblue49n8/anime%20pics/th_babyboy.jpg
guardian element: the moon
weapon: His pet dog can turn into things.
likes: to show off, being importent.
dislikes: being ignored, being a baby, the experiment that was done on him.
strengths: he is the only person to have the element of the moon, due to the fact that it was the experiment that corrupted his original element turning it to it's opposite.
weakness: he is weak against people with the sun element.
personality: Pretty happy at most times, but he can be dark and brooding when his other self takes over.
history: He was a young Vangola spy when he heard about the power enhancing experiments that where going to be done. when he signed up he was chosen to be the first artificial Rainbow pacifier wielder, he was supposed to have the sun element, but what they had done was unnatural, it caused the power of the sun to reject Him and destroy his memory, he still knows basic things, and has basic memories like the fact that he went to school at one point, but he doesn't remember his name or the names of places he has been. the unnatural experiment caused the creation of an Opposite element, the moon element.
(i can't wait until you are done with the first chapter X3)
in this book i have the recipe for disaster. if you want to know what it is. ask, and i shall tell you, "what is written here is the greatest threat to all man kind, the names of my friends."
name: Anonn james
age: 19
appearance: [IMG]http://img1.lln.crunchyroll.com/i/spire3/2d85aac2869de39b7fc19274bfc439dc1232463012_full.jpg[/IMG]
guardian element: dark cloud
weapon: two desert eagals that have cloud markings and the word vongola
likes: hibari, fights, lemons, apples, his guns
dislikes: tsuna, reborn, bannas, large crouds/grouping with others
strengths: he is an expert gun slinger and is a black belt in various forms of martial arts, he also has very impressive speed and reflexes and his bullets can multiply or cange directions, they also have cloud flames around them
weakness: he doesnt enjoy fighting girls and if you throw an apple or lemon he wil chase after it 70% of the time
personality: he is very calm and doesnt pick fights but like hibari he has a scary and demanding aura his catch fraise is 'run run as fast as you can but at the end of the day ill have your head JOKES!!'
history: he had been trianed by hibari when he was found in a ditch in france, hibari taught him how to use guns and how to use guns as tambas if needed, he also taught him how to 'multiply' himself, after a while hibari told him to join the vongola and under no sercumsances become aquantited with the tenth genoration boss
name: Ryu Agami
age: 18
apperance:
gender: male
guardian element: Star
crush: no one yet
skill/talent: Projectiles (Later discovers other abilities)
special attack: Burning Phoenix (Pummels his opponent with punches then elbows them sending them flying horizontally then appears hovering over them and throws his projectiles at blinding speeds that they look like they are on fire and usually drives opponent into the ground)
History: He is affiliated with the vongola family and has been the star pitcher at nammamori middle for the past year as he was placed there by Tsuna all though he doesn't know why. He was asked to watch over Rui all though he knows nothing of the mafia he follows orders. Sometimes hard to deal with but he is really dependable
extra: He is the lone wolf type of guy
Rui wakes up and stretches, the sun is shining and she has school today. Her mom kyoko is cooking downstairs as she is in the shower. She can smell the food as she is in the shower.
(Kyoko) "hmmm i wonder what Tsuna is doing right now... oh what are you doing" she says
(Esperimento) "Time to tutor Rui" he says
(Kyoko) "Really now, o dear lets hope she does better then tsuna, hows reborn doing" she asks
(Esper)" Fine but he is still working for tsuna, so im the hitman tutor don't worry i may be an experimental arcobaleno but i know what im doing" he says
Rui gets out the shower...gets dressed and goes downstair.."hey mom... why is there a baby here, and where is no good dad is he even showing up today" she says lazily.
(Kyoko) "Umm your dads at work and this is Esperimento, he's your new tutor" she says
(Esper) "You can call me esper, nice to meet you" he says
Rui looks at him.. "your kidding me right i get decent grades at school i don't need a tutor, thanks kid im leaving mom" she says walking out the door and begins walking to school.
Esper takes a sip of coffee... "come on saito looks like we have to get going" he says as he jumps out his seat and rides on a dog.
Meanwhile on the walk to school Rui see's Lilianne who is walking to school with her younger brother nathan
(Nathan) "hey slow down" he says
(Lilianne) "speed up your going to make me late for school" she says out of anger
Esper and saito walk up besides Rui..."your going to be late to then" he says
Rui looks at him... "o you the baby ... oh how i regret not being faster" she says yawning
Esper smiles as siato becomes a gun..."Fine then speed up with your dying will" he says pulling the trigger by the time she notices its too late as she falls to the ground... then gets back up..."REBORN!!!!" she yells out as her clothes burn up leaving her in her underwear
(lol she's only in her bra and underwear. XD i hope she has extra clothes o.o any who, awesome job zen!)
in this book i have the recipe for disaster. if you want to know what it is. ask, and i shall tell you, "what is written here is the greatest threat to all man kind, the names of my friends."
Rui runs to the school with her dying will while esper smiles "So that is her speed with her limits taken away impressive but still below the standard i was hoping for... master reborn you really didn't make this easy for me" he says
She speeds past Nathan and Lilianne leaving the wind blowing past them. (Nathan) "Was that the tsunayoshi girl" he asks
(Lili) "I think so...ugghh either way hurry up" she says as she begins to run.
Rui jumps high into the air... Esper is on her shoulder and he looks down and see's lili and Nathan.. mainly referring to lili "Hmm pretty fast" he says
(RUI) "I'll REACH SCHOOL ON TIME WITH MY DYING WILL" she says making it to the school as the bell rung. When she does the flame that was on her forehead is extinguished and she screams. Everyone is looking at her and she runs to the office... being that people wore uniforms she got a new one.
As she is putting it on... esper is at the window ..."CIAOUSSU" he says
(Rui) "AHHHH YOU WHAT DID YOU DO TO ME" she screams at him. (Esper) "i shot you with a dying will bullet, it removes your limitations" he says
(Rui) "WHAT WHY... IF YOUR SUPPOSE TO BE A TUTOR THEN WHY SHOOT ME" she says
(Esper) "Hmm you do ok at school your not at your full potential i will help you but im really suppose to help you become...VONGOLA XI the future boss of the Vongola family" he says. Rui looks at him surprised... "Vongola??" she questions
(Esper) "AY... your part of a mafia family and will be the boss... i am Esperimento and i am your hitman tutor" he says winking
(RUI) "MAFIA!!!!! nope im sorry i want no part in this kid...now im going to class later" she says leaving the changing room and she bumps into Ryu dropping his backpack on the floor.
(Rui) "Oh im sorry *She helps him pick it up* oh your the star pitcher of the baseball club" she says. Ryu glares for a second..."That i am... i thank you" he says looking into the room and see's esper on the window sill and they lock eyes for a second before he walks off. Rui looks back and Ryu then heads to class, while esperimento is in the same place... "Hmm good aura about him...and sorry Rui you have no choice in the matter just like Sawada...just you watch reborn senpai i will make a greater boss then you" he says going to sleep while on the window sill.
Meanwhile a limo arrives.. and a boy steps out... and they are at vongola headquarters in italy... Tsuna is in his office...and the door is forced open and tsuna looks up..."Hello ....FORTE" he says to the boy who is in the doorway glaring at him
in this book i have the recipe for disaster. if you want to know what it is. ask, and i shall tell you, "what is written here is the greatest threat to all man kind, the names of my friends."
(zen i have a question will they be having the same vongola rings as tsuna, or vongola rings that match there flame type)
in this book i have the recipe for disaster. if you want to know what it is. ask, and i shall tell you, "what is written here is the greatest threat to all man kind, the names of my friends."
Forte walks into the room with this attitude of confidence..."have you choosen a future successor for the vongola decimo?" he asks
(Tsuna) "Maybe i have, my decision is not final yet forte" he says
Forte blast a hole in the wall..."There should be no decision to make decimo i am clearly the right candidate, as i defeated all the other candidates for this position" he says. Forte lived in italy no one knew of Rui since tsuna kept her out of the mafia world, only his guardians knew of her.
Gokudera rushes into the office... (Gokudera) "DECIMO!!! are you ok" he says rushing in. Tsuna looks at him "im fine gokudera" he says. Gokudera then looks at forte... "Why did you attack the boss" he says summoning his gauntlet and firing at forte... but forte just looks on and creates a flame shield that blocks the attack.
(Forte) "i just came to speak to the tenth on being trained to take over the vongola as i am of age now and if i was attacking him it would have been like this" he says raising his hand and firing an attack at tsuna with incredible force and speed, Gokudera didn't even have time to summon his shield as the attack went past him. Tsuna raised his hand and the attack hits a wall of ice but it is so powerful it begins to break the ice but the ice withstands the attack. Tsuna gets up..."Hmm your just like your father you may have different personality types but at heart your still the same" he says.
Gokudera is angry..."A child like you won't become undecimo.. the bosses daughter will succeed him" he says out of anger and tsuna shoots him a look.
(Forte) "Daughter... so you have a child who you hope will succeed you decimo" he says
(Tsuna) "Gokudera you wil be punished for this but yes i do and i intend on her doing so if she proves she can" he says
(Forte) "You realize what that means... if she is the last candidate that stands in my way.. i will crush her" he says... he yawns... looking out the window and see's a squirrel and leaves the office.. he stopped caring mid sentence.
(Gokudera) "Im....im SORRY DECIMO that kid just aggravates me" he says
(Tsuna) "No it was inevitable... inform esperimento he needs to speed up her training" he says to gokudera
(ah gokudera you hotheaded idiot. good job on gokudera and tsuna i can actually see that kind of stuff with them, but i do think that in the future gokudera would have cooled off a bit. good job then it was pure win X3)
in this book i have the recipe for disaster. if you want to know what it is. ask, and i shall tell you, "what is written here is the greatest threat to all man kind, the names of my friends."