Ghost in the Shell Banner

I'm working on a piece of fan art in the form of a banner. It features the main characters from GitS, the Stand Alones.
I personally think that the outlines need cleaned up and that a few things need edited.
A friend of mine said he liked it great the way it was and my other friend said it was too empty.
It was made way late at night so it might look a little shaky, I'd definitely call it a rough draft.
http://www.puddingproductions.net/testingfinish.gif
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also opinions on my latest GitS signature are welcome too.
http://www.puddingproductions.net/gitssac.gif

It is a good start, the colors need work. Tone down the inverted look as well .

You know normally I dislike inverting colors like that but I thought it really fit with the thought behind this piece.
You really think it looks bad?

great job

Really? You think the inverted colors look okay?

yea its awesome

I think it looks great

its cool go motoko!!..

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