love

i have a song i'm working on for my girlfriend what do you think

verse 1]
i've been searching for a while
but know i have a reason to smile
i found the girl of my dreams
and shes been standng there the whole time
baby you know it's you
baby i love things you do
and how you do the things yo love
you know it's true (you know it's true)
i know i'm not perfect girl
but just give me a twirl
what you know we could go ride appolo's chariot
i'll take you to go meet secretariat
you know i love you girl
i know you love to
your my world
your the only girl i allow in my dreamworld

(so what you think so far)

( for the most part its really good. )